Peer Review Reflection

I have found that I am much more confident in this paper than I was in my last. I feel that I have a much better grasp on my focus and feel like there is a lot of analysis that is already incorporated into my paper. I want to work on adding in more specific details to my paper and replacing the generalizations. I tend to make generalizations in my writing and am really trying to focus on getting away from that in this paper. I think that adding in more examples can also help make my writing more clear. There is nothing major that I want to change. I think I have a lot of good concepts included so far and definitely want to keep my same framework. I'm considering looking through my essay and seeing if my paragraphs are organized in an order than makes the paper easy to follow or if they can be arranged in a way that like topics can be closer together. All in all I see no need to make any drastic changes to this paper just simple revisions. I think that the peer revision helped me to organize my thoughts better and also help me to see where exactly I was at with my writing.