Peer Review Paper #2

In my discovery draft I worked on analyzing Michael Jackson and how his image reflected his unstable mental state. However, I had a very hard time showing this without including a summary of his life which I feel took away from my analysis and prevented me from emphasizing what I wanted too. Instead I think I am going to change my paper to analyse a magazine. I will approach it by talking about how the cover photos draw people in and then we read the text. I will also talk about how we are attracted by certain things because of the colors and the text that talks about how easy and fast can be to look like them. I want to choose this because it is a process that I experience every day when I am standing in line at a grocery store and pick up a magazine because I am awed by the cover. For my current essay my peer didn't really ask any questions because we talked about how I wanted to change my topic to something I felt I good grasp better and therefore better directly analyze.