Peer Review #2

This peer review session went very well. I felt that after taking time and working on my essay for the past week has really helped me to get a better grasp as to where this paper should be going and what details and concepts should be included in order to get there. As a result, I felt that I was able to revise my peer's essay much better. I tried to really highlight what was good and touch on what could be expanded on to help her improve her paper. By doing this, it also helped me be aware of things I should look out for when going back and improving my revisions.