In my own introduction, I focus on the general progression through life. I start by touching on the simplicities of childhood and work my way up to talk about how as you grow, so do responsibilities. As we grow up we get closer and closer to being exposed to "real life." I start with a commonly held view but expand of off it and take a deeper look into it.
In my conclusion I touch back on how growing up happens in stages, which is what I focused a lot on in my introduction. I connect back to how things gradually get harder and more real as we grow up and how what we watch on TV changes due to what stage of life we are at. I think I need to focus more on the readers question of "so what." Although I talk about how our values change and growing up brings new challenges, I would like to leave the audience with a harder hitting image or possibly leave the reader thinking by presenting some possible implications for the future.
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