Anti-Ad peer review

The peer review for my rough draft went well. It always helps me to get insight from another person regarding which way I should take my paper next and what concepts I should try to focus and expand off of. From this peer review, I am going to focus on expanding more on the description of my actual anti-ad and also be sure to include what audience it is geared towards. Also I may try to incorporate the effect these athletes are having on it's audience and how the audience may be influenced (childhood obesity, false advertising). Children see these sporty cool guys advertising McDonald's and they think by eating the food themselves they will be able to be just like them. However, by eating the food consistently their bodies will eventually transform to become less and less like these athlete's. This is an example of false, or misleading advertising.